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16 February 2011

Publishing Nightmares

Found a link to a blog post on Rachelle Gardner's blog (she's a literary agent) that sounds like this winter in the northeastern U.S.: HELL.




Here's the link.

Is it any wonder that more and more writers and would-be writers are turning to self publishing?

Nancy

Publishing Nightmares

Found a link to a blog post on Rachelle Gardner's blog (she's a literary agent) that sounds like this winter in the northeastern U.S.: HELL.




Here's the link.

Is it any wonder that more and more writers and would-be writers are turning to self publishing?

Nancy

10 February 2011

Antagonists

A poster over on the AW blog started a February blog chain (of course I missed out on "signing up" for it, lol).  So, instead, I'll be doing that on my own - although the OP did say that "Bloggers, you are welcome to join in as we progress."

And I'll get my chance...whenever the chain gets to me (could be a while).

So here's my take on it all.



Antagonists - Part 1

Describe your antagnoist in 50 words or less.

Well, since I have two current WIPs, I'll do it for both.

Background for Personal Demons:  The Home Front, World War II, Los Angeles.  The federal government has enacted a law where all people of Japanese descent are to be rounded up and put in internment centers. (historical fantasy)

First, for Personal Demons, wherein the antagonist, a Japanese American, is masquerading as a Chinese, calling himself Charlie Lee:

Born to first generation Japanese (issei), Charlie Lee isn’t his real name, but he needed to stay out of the internment camps to kill his impure sister and unborn child.  Physically he’s skinney and slight, but he doesn’t need a human body in order to accomplish his ends.

Background for Changing Faces:  A woman in a small New Jersey town has magical powers that lead her to believe a landlord in an old house might know about or is the focus of evil invading that town. (paranormal suspense)

With most of his face disfigured in the Vietnam War, Mr. Underhill feels lucky his stumpy hand was healed by a creature he encountered when separated from his platoon.  He feels the only way he can go through life with his hideous face is to do his own cosmetic surgery.
As you can see, I don't have this one all worked out as yet (the guy's name is just a working name for now).

Antagonists - Part 2

What would you say to your antagonist if you met him or her in real life? Post a scene in response to this question in 100 words or less.

Personal Demons:

The small, skinny man’s Asiatic eyes dart about and he hugs the walls as he eventually sidles past me.


I can't resist.

"Excuse me," I say. He turns, scowling, and I hesitate. Will he hit me? Then I notice his "I am Chinese" button. Of course. "Is someone after you?" A sudden thought of being involved in a shoot-'em-up is eased by his wavering smile.


"Um, I am looking for my sister. She is...in a bad way, and I need to talk to her boyfriend."


He doffs his hat as he skulks away, while my skin prickles.

Scary liar.

I did this in present tense because I can. :-)  And keep in mind that this takes place in 1942, so I'm imagining how I might have looked at things back then.
 
Changing Faces:
 
I hear strange things about the landlord. His apartment is on the second floor, and the floor creaks as I approach the door and rap on it. “Mr. Underhill?”


The door groans open, as if stricken with arthritis. A person stands there with a hood drawn taut over most of his or her face. Shadows amid the dim light. “Who are you?”

“The new owner.” Deep male voice. “Need to check something.” My eyes take a minute to adjust, but I notice the jumble of furniture and papers. Clear jars litter the floor.

“They’re for preserving,” he says.

Again in present tense.  Just little teasers, heh.
 
I'm not sure if this is what the OP had in mind, but I'm running with it anyway.
 
Fun!
 
Nancy

Antagonists

A poster over on the AW blog started a February blog chain (of course I missed out on "signing up" for it, lol).  So, instead, I'll be doing that on my own - although the OP did say that "Bloggers, you are welcome to join in as we progress."

And I'll get my chance...whenever the chain gets to me (could be a while).

So here's my take on it all.



Antagonists - Part 1

Describe your antagnoist in 50 words or less.

Well, since I have two current WIPs, I'll do it for both.

Background for Personal Demons:  The Home Front, World War II, Los Angeles.  The federal government has enacted a law where all people of Japanese descent are to be rounded up and put in internment centers. (historical fantasy)

First, for Personal Demons, wherein the antagonist, a Japanese American, is masquerading as a Chinese, calling himself Charlie Lee:

Born to first generation Japanese (issei), Charlie Lee isn’t his real name, but he needed to stay out of the internment camps to kill his impure sister and unborn child.  Physically he’s skinney and slight, but he doesn’t need a human body in order to accomplish his ends.

Background for Changing Faces:  A woman in a small New Jersey town has magical powers that lead her to believe a landlord in an old house might know about or is the focus of evil invading that town. (paranormal suspense)

With most of his face disfigured in the Vietnam War, Mr. Underhill feels lucky his stumpy hand was healed by a creature he encountered when separated from his platoon.  He feels the only way he can go through life with his hideous face is to do his own cosmetic surgery.
As you can see, I don't have this one all worked out as yet (the guy's name is just a working name for now).

Antagonists - Part 2

What would you say to your antagonist if you met him or her in real life? Post a scene in response to this question in 100 words or less.

Personal Demons:

The small, skinny man’s Asiatic eyes dart about and he hugs the walls as he eventually sidles past me.


I can't resist.

"Excuse me," I say. He turns, scowling, and I hesitate. Will he hit me? Then I notice his "I am Chinese" button. Of course. "Is someone after you?" A sudden thought of being involved in a shoot-'em-up is eased by his wavering smile.


"Um, I am looking for my sister. She is...in a bad way, and I need to talk to her boyfriend."


He doffs his hat as he skulks away, while my skin prickles.

Scary liar.

I did this in present tense because I can. :-)  And keep in mind that this takes place in 1942, so I'm imagining how I might have looked at things back then.
 
Changing Faces:
 
I hear strange things about the landlord. His apartment is on the second floor, and the floor creaks as I approach the door and rap on it. “Mr. Underhill?”


The door groans open, as if stricken with arthritis. A person stands there with a hood drawn taut over most of his or her face. Shadows amid the dim light. “Who are you?”

“The new owner.” Deep male voice. “Need to check something.” My eyes take a minute to adjust, but I notice the jumble of furniture and papers. Clear jars litter the floor.

“They’re for preserving,” he says.

Again in present tense.  Just little teasers, heh.
 
I'm not sure if this is what the OP had in mind, but I'm running with it anyway.
 
Fun!
 
Nancy

09 February 2011

My Writing and the Indie Scene (such as it is)

This post got me thinking about a lot of things, mostly writing related.

Of course, I've been thinking about my writing, which, BTW, now includes another WIP, a paranormal suspense, that's actually based on a short story I tried to submit mucho years ago.  It was rejected by a few different ezines and print zines, and I let it slip by the wayside.




I think I know why: it wasn't good enough.  I thought it was.  After all, I'd just sold my First. Ever. Short. to an ezine...after only submitting it to three places.  Yeah, I was high on myself, and was brought waaay down to Earth after those rejections.

So I moved on to novels.

Novel In Progress Number 1

This is one I originally started years ago.  It had a time travel element to it (a woman going back in time to 1942 to see her birth mother, also, a Roman deity :-)), but I started reading articles about different things I needed to do (or so I thought) or have in the story, so I chucked in just about anything I could think of.

What a bloated mess.

Well, I resurrected that this past year, completely reworking it, thanks to a writing instructor whose only question was how timely and up to date the time travel element was in fantasy books.  My reading time is small at the moment, but I've been a voracious reader in the past, and I know I'll get back to that way at some point...so my look at recent fantasy books made me conclude to drop that altogether.

Remember that for the next section of this post.

I think it's progressing very well, with a few bumps, but I'll deal with that AFTER I've finished the first draft.

I haven't done any writing in that in about a week or so, because of that short story I mentioned earlier.

Novel In Progress Number 2

Which takes me to my second novel.  I originally thought it would be a novella, which Wikipedia says has between 17,500 and 40,000 words.  Now I'm not so sure.  It might get to novel length (over 40,000 words) because I've been working like a nut case to get it done.

Words so far this week: 2,500.  Don't know what chapter I'm up to, as I haven't figured that out as yet.  But the words are flowing, which is more important.

As I said above, it's a paranormal suspense, like this one, and this one.  All right, not exactly, lol.  The paranormal elements are there, including the protagonist, who has powers to undo dark auras, which can induce people to kill; some romance, with a hunky guy who has a leg prosthesis (the romantic element is NOT of the Happily Every After (HEA) variety; and a creepy guy who's the landlord of the building the hunky guy lives in.  Oh, he's got a grisly, um, habit, that was suggested to me by a Beatles tune (I won't say which one).  Not that this particular Beatles tune has anything grisly in the lyrics; it's one of their most wistful almost melancholy tunes, I think.

The New Indie Scene

With lots of sales of The Kindle ebook reader last Christmas, tons of people started to download ebooks from Amazon.  And figure in Barnes and Noble's Nook.  And smartphones.

You get the idea.

Amanda Hocking is the current darling of the self pubbing scene, having sold a boatload of ebooks.  Her key was to upload a slew of books in the same series (YA paranormal, I believe), and enough people decided to give it a whirl that she was number one on Amazon's Kindle bestselling ebooks list for weeks.

Now you're wondering...where is this leading to?  (If you've already figured it out, skip this sentence. ;-))

I'm not getting any younger, and my health has come into question a lot lately - I'm not ready to kick the bucket yet, and intend to be around for a looong time - so I'm considering other ideas.  Nothing is set in granite at this point, but I like to explore everything that's available.  And ebooks - Kindle, Nook, whatever - are a big thing at the moment.

I'll just continue to gather facts and opinions before doing anything.  Part of that fact finding mission was accomplished over the weekend: I bought two Kindle-formatted ebooks off of Smashwords.  Why there and not Amazon?  Because Amazon doesn't use PayPal and Smashwords does.

I downloaded To Kill a Warlock, by H. P. Mallory (great cover, BTW) and Loose Ends, by Terri Reid.  The first is an urban fantasy (which I thought I didn't care for), while the second is a paranormal mystery.  Both women decided now was the time to get their stories out there, instead of going through the query agent/submit to publisher grind.  I admire them both for deciding to go this route, because it's not an easy thing, ESPECIALLY if you've heard for quite a while that getting an agent is not only a pain in the ass but they can do some horrid things to your royalty statements (I'll probably do a post on that sometime).  Submitting directly to publishers ain't easy, either; most have eliminated their slush piles (with the agents now in charge of that).

I haven't gotten through either book as yet, but when I do, I'll do reviews.

In the meantime, you simply have to see this fun cover of Ms. Mallory's (which she did herself!):

To Kill A Warlock, an Urban Fantasy (Dulcie O'Neil Series, Book #1)

My Writing and the Indie Scene (such as it is)

This post got me thinking about a lot of things, mostly writing related.

Of course, I've been thinking about my writing, which, BTW, now includes another WIP, a paranormal suspense, that's actually based on a short story I tried to submit mucho years ago.  It was rejected by a few different ezines and print zines, and I let it slip by the wayside.




I think I know why: it wasn't good enough.  I thought it was.  After all, I'd just sold my First. Ever. Short. to an ezine...after only submitting it to three places.  Yeah, I was high on myself, and was brought waaay down to Earth after those rejections.

So I moved on to novels.

Novel In Progress Number 1

This is one I originally started years ago.  It had a time travel element to it (a woman going back in time to 1942 to see her birth mother, also, a Roman deity :-)), but I started reading articles about different things I needed to do (or so I thought) or have in the story, so I chucked in just about anything I could think of.

What a bloated mess.

Well, I resurrected that this past year, completely reworking it, thanks to a writing instructor whose only question was how timely and up to date the time travel element was in fantasy books.  My reading time is small at the moment, but I've been a voracious reader in the past, and I know I'll get back to that way at some point...so my look at recent fantasy books made me conclude to drop that altogether.

Remember that for the next section of this post.

I think it's progressing very well, with a few bumps, but I'll deal with that AFTER I've finished the first draft.

I haven't done any writing in that in about a week or so, because of that short story I mentioned earlier.

Novel In Progress Number 2

Which takes me to my second novel.  I originally thought it would be a novella, which Wikipedia says has between 17,500 and 40,000 words.  Now I'm not so sure.  It might get to novel length (over 40,000 words) because I've been working like a nut case to get it done.

Words so far this week: 2,500.  Don't know what chapter I'm up to, as I haven't figured that out as yet.  But the words are flowing, which is more important.

As I said above, it's a paranormal suspense, like this one, and this one.  All right, not exactly, lol.  The paranormal elements are there, including the protagonist, who has powers to undo dark auras, which can induce people to kill; some romance, with a hunky guy who has a leg prosthesis (the romantic element is NOT of the Happily Every After (HEA) variety; and a creepy guy who's the landlord of the building the hunky guy lives in.  Oh, he's got a grisly, um, habit, that was suggested to me by a Beatles tune (I won't say which one).  Not that this particular Beatles tune has anything grisly in the lyrics; it's one of their most wistful almost melancholy tunes, I think.

The New Indie Scene

With lots of sales of The Kindle ebook reader last Christmas, tons of people started to download ebooks from Amazon.  And figure in Barnes and Noble's Nook.  And smartphones.

You get the idea.

Amanda Hocking is the current darling of the self pubbing scene, having sold a boatload of ebooks.  Her key was to upload a slew of books in the same series (YA paranormal, I believe), and enough people decided to give it a whirl that she was number one on Amazon's Kindle bestselling ebooks list for weeks.

Now you're wondering...where is this leading to?  (If you've already figured it out, skip this sentence. ;-))

I'm not getting any younger, and my health has come into question a lot lately - I'm not ready to kick the bucket yet, and intend to be around for a looong time - so I'm considering other ideas.  Nothing is set in granite at this point, but I like to explore everything that's available.  And ebooks - Kindle, Nook, whatever - are a big thing at the moment.

I'll just continue to gather facts and opinions before doing anything.  Part of that fact finding mission was accomplished over the weekend: I bought two Kindle-formatted ebooks off of Smashwords.  Why there and not Amazon?  Because Amazon doesn't use PayPal and Smashwords does.

I downloaded To Kill a Warlock, by H. P. Mallory (great cover, BTW) and Loose Ends, by Terri Reid.  The first is an urban fantasy (which I thought I didn't care for), while the second is a paranormal mystery.  Both women decided now was the time to get their stories out there, instead of going through the query agent/submit to publisher grind.  I admire them both for deciding to go this route, because it's not an easy thing, ESPECIALLY if you've heard for quite a while that getting an agent is not only a pain in the ass but they can do some horrid things to your royalty statements (I'll probably do a post on that sometime).  Submitting directly to publishers ain't easy, either; most have eliminated their slush piles (with the agents now in charge of that).

I haven't gotten through either book as yet, but when I do, I'll do reviews.

In the meantime, you simply have to see this fun cover of Ms. Mallory's (which she did herself!):

To Kill A Warlock, an Urban Fantasy (Dulcie O'Neil Series, Book #1)

07 February 2011

Congrats to the Green Bay Packers!

Yup, watched the Super Bowl all the way through.

It was an enjoyable game, and it wasn't until the end of the fourth quarter that (I think) anyone knew the Pack would win.

Aaron Rodgers was stellar; Ben R., less so.  Of course, Green Bay could've been up by a lot more points if some of his receivers held on to the ball.  But the Steelers kept coming back and coming back, and I was reminded of the 2nd Giants-Eagles game this year (what a nightmare, one I really don't want to remember).

The Steelers, though, weren't able to overcome the Packers' defense at the end.  Or maybe it was a combo of that and some poor throws by Big Ben.

Whatever.  I like both teams, still do (except when they play the Giants).

This was a great ending to the 2010 NFL season.  Now if the Collective Bargaining Agreement can be worked out before the start of the 2011 season...

Nancy Beck

Congrats to the Green Bay Packers!

Yup, watched the Super Bowl all the way through.

It was an enjoyable game, and it wasn't until the end of the fourth quarter that (I think) anyone knew the Pack would win.

Aaron Rodgers was stellar; Ben R., less so.  Of course, Green Bay could've been up by a lot more points if some of his receivers held on to the ball.  But the Steelers kept coming back and coming back, and I was reminded of the 2nd Giants-Eagles game this year (what a nightmare, one I really don't want to remember).

The Steelers, though, weren't able to overcome the Packers' defense at the end.  Or maybe it was a combo of that and some poor throws by Big Ben.

Whatever.  I like both teams, still do (except when they play the Giants).

This was a great ending to the 2010 NFL season.  Now if the Collective Bargaining Agreement can be worked out before the start of the 2011 season...

Nancy Beck

04 February 2011

Maria V. Snyder

I've loved Ms. Snyder's Study and Glass books.  Poison Study was especially an eye opener for me - plenty of humor, some romance, danger...really good stuff.

I know she has a new book out that's not in the universe of those books, and I'm not interested (at this point) in reading it; it's dystopian, which isn't what's stopping me, it's just that I have SO MANY books to read, lol.

Anyway, I found the following interview of her.  She sounds like a really lovely person (and I get her email newsletter), and when I reviewed Poison Study way back when, she actually went out of her way to comment on it (nicely, of course).  Although I understand why authors are a little hesitant to get in touch with readers (I understand about stalking), I've never done more than one or two emails back and forth between an author and me (yes, I've contacted two other authors, one on one of his novels, the other on an author's online short story).

So, um, what was I talking about before I went on my spiel?  Oh, yeah, the interview of Ms. Snyder.  She mainly talks about the Glass series.


Maria V. Snyder

I've loved Ms. Snyder's Study and Glass books.  Poison Study was especially an eye opener for me - plenty of humor, some romance, danger...really good stuff.

I know she has a new book out that's not in the universe of those books, and I'm not interested (at this point) in reading it; it's dystopian, which isn't what's stopping me, it's just that I have SO MANY books to read, lol.

Anyway, I found the following interview of her.  She sounds like a really lovely person (and I get her email newsletter), and when I reviewed Poison Study way back when, she actually went out of her way to comment on it (nicely, of course).  Although I understand why authors are a little hesitant to get in touch with readers (I understand about stalking), I've never done more than one or two emails back and forth between an author and me (yes, I've contacted two other authors, one on one of his novels, the other on an author's online short story).

So, um, what was I talking about before I went on my spiel?  Oh, yeah, the interview of Ms. Snyder.  She mainly talks about the Glass series.


02 February 2011

My Writing

I got back to writing my own stuff this week.  It's been a while, and I think it's a combo of being lazy (of which I have a lot of practice ;-)) and a tad of depression.

The depression stems from this crappy weather this winter.  Living in the northeastern U.S., you know the winter is going to be cold as all get out, there will be some snow, and you deal with it.

But this winter?  I mean, WTF?

Every frigging week there's at least one day where you have snow up the ying-yang.  This week, it's the fun and frolic of ice.  However, it looks like I might actually make it into work, because the temps are warming up more than the weather people originally thought.  As I'm a temp (not by choice), I don't get paid if I don't get in, so this is changeover to good, old regular rain is welcome.

Number of words written this week so far: approximately 1,500.

I'm also critting/betaing a novel for someone over on Absolute Write, so that's cut into my own writing time a bit.  But it's also helped me get back into my own writing, which is always a good thing.

In fact, I've decided that I'm not going to edit the crap out of this ms.  No more.  I did that with the original version of this story and stuffed so full of odds and ends, that it made no sense.  (And editing was a nightmare.)

So...I've laid down the law.  I will do three revisions, then send it out/whatever.  The first draft is the "Get Down the Story" draft.  It's minimalist, with some bits of dialogue and some description.  Second time around is for adding more details, excising things that seemed like good ideas at the time, and to fix any typos/grammar nits/punctuation problems.

Third time will be to add any further necessary details and further typos, etc.

That's it.  I'll then work on a query and either a sequel or another series idea.  I'm no spring chicken anymore, so the time to get moving is now.

I've noticed that there are at least two people who believe that writing fast and minimal revisions are the way to go.  I've finally come around to that way of thinking.

Nancy

P.S.  It's Ground Hog Day (hubby and I watched the movie yesterday; profound and funny at the same time, not an easy thing to pull off)!  Already saw Punxy Phil this morning - early spring!  (Let's hope he's right, 'cause I'm really sick of all this snow and crap!)

Of course, I had to find a clip where Phil Connors (Bill Murray) has fun with a woman named Nancy. :-)

My Writing

I got back to writing my own stuff this week.  It's been a while, and I think it's a combo of being lazy (of which I have a lot of practice ;-)) and a tad of depression.

The depression stems from this crappy weather this winter.  Living in the northeastern U.S., you know the winter is going to be cold as all get out, there will be some snow, and you deal with it.

But this winter?  I mean, WTF?

Every frigging week there's at least one day where you have snow up the ying-yang.  This week, it's the fun and frolic of ice.  However, it looks like I might actually make it into work, because the temps are warming up more than the weather people originally thought.  As I'm a temp (not by choice), I don't get paid if I don't get in, so this is changeover to good, old regular rain is welcome.

Number of words written this week so far: approximately 1,500.

I'm also critting/betaing a novel for someone over on Absolute Write, so that's cut into my own writing time a bit.  But it's also helped me get back into my own writing, which is always a good thing.

In fact, I've decided that I'm not going to edit the crap out of this ms.  No more.  I did that with the original version of this story and stuffed so full of odds and ends, that it made no sense.  (And editing was a nightmare.)

So...I've laid down the law.  I will do three revisions, then send it out/whatever.  The first draft is the "Get Down the Story" draft.  It's minimalist, with some bits of dialogue and some description.  Second time around is for adding more details, excising things that seemed like good ideas at the time, and to fix any typos/grammar nits/punctuation problems.

Third time will be to add any further necessary details and further typos, etc.

That's it.  I'll then work on a query and either a sequel or another series idea.  I'm no spring chicken anymore, so the time to get moving is now.

I've noticed that there are at least two people who believe that writing fast and minimal revisions are the way to go.  I've finally come around to that way of thinking.

Nancy

P.S.  It's Ground Hog Day (hubby and I watched the movie yesterday; profound and funny at the same time, not an easy thing to pull off)!  Already saw Punxy Phil this morning - early spring!  (Let's hope he's right, 'cause I'm really sick of all this snow and crap!)

Of course, I had to find a clip where Phil Connors (Bill Murray) has fun with a woman named Nancy. :-)